Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Absence

I discovered Six Sentences the other day, thanks to my friends at LibraryThing. This piece is the first thing I am writing for that blog. It is a rewrite of a longer short-short I jotted down several years ago when I was not in a happy place.

“Have you ever noticed the similarity between absence and abscess?” she had asked me years ago after her father died. Today, I think I understand what she meant, but her absence seems more like an unrelenting cancer than an abscess. I look at the sunset and wish I could reach across the Void to ease the ache. Turning to my oldest daughter, I repeat her mother’s words.

“Christ, Dad,” she exclaims as if I have affronted her newfound adulthood. “Do you always have to be so fucking weird?”

Cadence

OK. I have been ignoring this blog too long. Here is something I wrote several years ago.

Oh, I wanna be a state park ranger
I wanna live a life that’s stranger
Than anything I’ve done before
 
I wanna live on beer and Fritos
I wanna swat them big mosquitos
I wanna hear them tourists roar

Saturday, May 12, 2007

What I See First

I am not yet awake as I right this. The words wanted out too much to wait for coffee.

What I see first is beauty:
Pillows have arranged her hair.
Sleep shadows her eyes.
Desire paints her lips.
Her breasts rise with each soft breath.
 
What I always see is love.

Sunday, May 6, 2007

Hope

In church, we had this choir service, which means that the choir performed the service. The focus of this particular service was nature, birds in particular.

One of the numbers we performed was an “art song” (I find even the term offensive. Are other songs not art?) derived from a poem by Emily Dickinson. An art song is essentially a poem set to music. The problem arises in that the composer very seldom understands the poem. The result is that the poem and music seldom serve each other. In this case, “Hope Is a Thing with Feathers” derives from Dickinson’s poem “Hope.” Reading only the text, the composer forced some unnaturally cheerful—some would say manic—music onto a poem that essentially a depressive recluse’s attempt to deal with life. Dickinson loved nature and birds, but she seldom ventured outdoors and almost never off the grounds of her parents’ house.

Dickinson is one of my favorite poets. In fact, she is the only poet who I care enough about to own more than one volume of verse—other than maybe Shakespeare or Poe (but their volumes contain other types of works). This painful rendition of one of her better poems caused me to pen the following parody. I don’t consider this a parody of Dickinson’s poem, but rather the art song.

Hope is a thing that whithers
And suppurates the soul
A baleful tune without remorse
That never stops at all
 
More fickle than a gale this word
That leads your heart astray
Turns winter to a summer bird
That blithely flies away
 
It makes its nest in snowy lands
And travels o’re the sea
And ever in extremity
On human hearts it feeds

It could also be fun to play with, “Hope is the thing that slithers....”